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Watch the stars
as they shine so bright.
Listen to the crickets,
as they sing at night.

Watch the moonbeams
as they light our way.
Listen to the trees
as they begin to sway.

Watch the fireflies
as they swing to and fro.
Listen to our love
as it continues to grow.

Watch out your window
for my star to appear.
Listen for my heart beat
as it draws ever near.

Watch as time
slips quietly by.
Listen to your soul
as it tries not to cry.
©2003-2009 ~Justls965
:iconjustls965:

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I woke up one day and mesa wrote this.. dunno why.. I just did.

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:iconcryinginksama:
ooo i love your rhyming schemes, i can never write rhyming poetry myself, this is really great, i love the imagery, the calmness of the beginning and how it's shattered by the last line, very cool
:iconeitherstorm:
Oo.. Wonderful rhyming scheme in this one. And it flows so smoothly. I have felt this way many times. Wonderful stuff Justin! :)

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Out of the shadows, there shines a light. The light of a falling dove. out of the shadows steps a king, the king of everlasting love....
:iconwarped-and-twisted:
Ooo love it!!! I like how you write your poetry, and the images that appear when you read it.

Keep it up!
:iconwintertundra:
Awwwww :;sniffles and gets tissue:: not right Tris has cried to much today but I loved it so sweet. ::blows nose:: I want more soon now!!! ^_^

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